Captain's Log Part 1

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Captain's Log Part 1

Post by QwertyMan » Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:59 pm

Date: 8/XX/XXXX
Captain: XXXX XXXXX
(based on a true gameplay experience, but some things were forgotten since this happened last year)

Today was a ,well awkward day. I hired a crew named Jamil (Polo?), he was very bright man and he was very happy to work at my vessel. I hired another crew which was, guess who: Jamil's daughter Carla (Polo?), and I was very, very confused. As soon as she teleported to my ship in the Bridge, she saw me and Jamil and said "DAD!" "Carla, what are you doing here!? How did you slip through Security in the Hiring Room and get in???" Jamil said furiously. "It's a long story dad." Carla said with a smirk. "Why did you come here! You can't handle this Carla, you're too young to be working here!" Jamil shouted with a stern look on his face. Carla was shocked and shouted, "I DIDN'T WANT YOU TO LEAVE ME, OK? I DIDN'T WANT TO BE ALONE. MOTHER WOULD OF BEEN VERY MAD AT YOU. I WANTED TO BE WITH YOU, HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME AT EARTH!" "Mr.Polo, who is this girl, is it your daughter?" I said. But he didn't listen to me and said to Carla, " YOUR MOTHER IS DEAD OK? SHE HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS! WE ALREADY TALKED ABOUT THIS CARLA!" " MR. POLO" I shouted. "WHAT!" He shouted, and then he said in a calm voice, "Oh, uh sorry Captain. But, Car-" Then I interrupted, "Carla is in the squad now. You can't do anything about it, neither could I. And I hired her, to be my crew member. You should not talk to your daughter like that Mr. Polo, she is old enough to be here,(which I lied about) I'm very disappointed, Mr.Polo." Jamil looked at her daughter very seriously. "You are dismissed, Mr.Polo." "Carla, I want to talk with you." "Ok Captain." Jamil said, and left the Bridge. Then, I heard soft weeping, it was Carla. (That's the end of Part One, hoped you liked it and stay tuned for Part 2!) :D
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Re: Captain's Log Part 1

Post by THEREALJEML » Mon Mar 30, 2015 4:16 pm

Thumbs up man :)
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Re: Captain's Log Part 1

Post by QwertyMan » Mon Mar 30, 2015 5:22 pm

THEREALJEML wrote:Thumbs up man :)
Thanks. :D I always wanted to share this gameplay experience with a little twist.
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Re: Captain's Log Part 1

Post by QwertyMan » Mon Mar 30, 2015 5:43 pm

THEREALJEML wrote:Thumbs up man :)
But, I wish more people saw this story. :lol: I doubt that will happen.
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Re: Captain's Log Part 1

Post by stevetranby » Wed Apr 15, 2015 4:30 pm

Keep 'em coming.
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Re: Captain's Log Part 1

Post by QwertyMan » Wed Apr 15, 2015 9:24 pm

stevetranby wrote:Keep 'em coming.
Pt.2 should come this Saturday-ish,not sure. If it's possible, could you have to make a Survival Story Sub topic for SG:G. Thanks. :D
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